I am writing a book and I thought it would be interesting to try something new... I have decided to release my progress one chapter at a time and get feedback... Really would LOVE feedback! Thanks Chapter One The ultimate sacrifice If felt reassuring to work out the details, like when I would finally close my eyes to this world and never have to wake up. The setting of the sun seemed like the perfect time to disappear into the abyss unnoticed. I knew that soon the beach would settle into its nighttime slumber as everyone would pack up and head home. Until then, I passed the time with thoughts of the world that would continue on without me. I even considered what my tombstone would say as I lay six feet under it—Angel Ryan Born June 30, 1997 * Died June 29th 2014, Doomed from day one.